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ElizabethSwan July 30th, 2006 03:38 AM

Meleth -pg-13 -
 
This is the first Fan Fic I ever posted so here goes


Chapter1
I was only a girl (about 10 for a human realy 25 as an elf)when some strangers found me living by the steam in a hut made of leaves and wood and mud. "Sigil (Dagger)!" "Lang (Cuttles)!" They had argued "Sereg (Blood)!" They said in unison. "Blood I smell Blood Elrond!" One Said "Me to Haldir" The one Called Elrond said. They had said something I had understood. I wanted to cry for help but thought it wasnt a good idea. They kicked my home (which had animal blood on it)and it fell down. "Hey what did you do that for?" I had slurred sort of. "Who are you?" The one called Haldir said. "I'm Isail, who are you?" I had said in a normal way. "Im Haldir and this is Elrond." Haldir said. "Why do you ask?" "I havent seen or herd anyone since I was 4 years old." I had said. My eyes were asking and curious(sp) they wanted to know more about theese strangers. All I herd them say now was "Edhel (Elf)" and "Aduil(Evening) " and "Wen (Lady)" "Ok Isail will come with us to meet young legolas in the palace while we talk to Thranduil(sp Legolas's dad)" Elrond said. "Who is he a servant a prince.....?"I said then cut off. "SHHHHHH I hear something" Haldir said. But it was only the sound of Elrond setting up my house.

ElizabethSwan July 30th, 2006 04:10 AM

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Chapter2


We had gotten to the palace and I had been set in the garden awaiting Legolas's arival and I had heard footsteps of a young person."Well Legolas here she is hope you have fun." Someone had said.I was scared about meeting him. I had so many questions. "Hello! You must be Isail!" Legolas said. "Y-yes" I had shakily(sp) said. I had seen the joy in his eyes as he watched me. He seemed to be reading my every thought. "T-the s-sky i-is b-blue." I had said so I could strike up a conversation. "Yes it is." He had said "You remind me of someone I had met while I had been exploring the forest one day." "Ohhh I do? Maby that person....." I had started. "Isail, would you like a tour of the gardens?" Legolas had said. "Sure I love the sweet smell of flowers after rain." I had said. It had rained earlyer that day and I had sung to it like it was listining. We were walking when Legolas started to hum somthing. "Beautifull!" I had breathed. "Hmmm? Did you say something?" Legolas said minute later. "No nothing." I said. "Ohhhhh look at theese they are grown to bloom all year." Legolas pointed out. He had shown me the garden and was humming again. It sounded haunting. "Whats this?" I had said pointing at a door. "Nothing." Legolas had said. We had gone on like this for days when Legolas Had looked at me and finaly looked happy.
I had left with a sad goodbye and was taken to live at Rivendell(sp) there I would be safer.. "Goodbye Legolas I had so much fun I'll miss you!" :cry: (sp) I had said "Me to Isail!" Legolas said he kissed my hand and I turned a shade of crimson. :blush: We left and I wached Legolas as I fell asleep in the wagon. :wub: :sleep:

ElizabethSwan July 30th, 2006 01:24 PM

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Chapter3 20 years later

"No I am not a prissy elf no more as you are a pricess :mad: " I had said in a huff. "Alright Isail, you are not a prissy Elf." Aragorn said. "Thank you 'kindly' sir I'll be on my way now." I said. "ISAIL you are not going anywhere, Elrond said to stay here you have a guest coming." Aragorn had said angrily. Just then I had jummped in a nearby tree and had conceled(sp) myself in the branches defencively. "What the........" Aragorn satarted but i had cut himoff with a "SHHHHHHHHHHHH, now is not the time to ask, but to do." I said in my wise voice. I had herd something that Aragorn had not, running steps twords us. "No way you can catch me now, your way behind me!" Someone had said. "Legolas!" I had whispered. I had hid even deeper in the tree so he wouldn't see me. "Legolas is here, well now he must be your guest." Argorn also whispered. "I see you Aragorn and whose that up in the tree hiding, I can just barely see her." Legolas had said. I jumped down from the tree and landed in a low crouch. "Well well well, it's Legolas 'Prince' of mirkwood and the wood Elfs." I had payfully said. "Tell Me your name." Legolas said. He could tell I knew him from somwhere. "Isail, My Prince, Lord, um...." I had said. "It's you, I had missed you Isail." Legolas said." " I invite you to the banquet as me date."

ElizabethSwan July 30th, 2006 05:06 PM

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Chapter4

That night in my roon I was thinking about Legolas and the date. "He remembers me, he likes me I think, I like him, :heart: Ohhh what a magical night." I had said as I twirled around the room. "Hold still m'Lady I can not get your dress on you if you are dancing." Kai said. "Ohhhh sorry, I'll stop, what if he remembers he kissed my hand?" I giggled. I was wearing a whight dress that came just past my knees.(think Eyoens(sp) dress she wore in 2 towers just as Aragorn and the boys were just coming up to Edoras and the flag tore off but with gold edging) "Pick out your jewlery now please m'lady." Kai said. I had picked a verry intricit(sp) silver necalace with Emeralds and Dimonds it had a matching bracelet and ring. "Now for hair and makeup." Kai said. My long red hair was put up into multile braids and I had an Gold powder on my green eyes. I had saw Legolas just down the hall and I stopped and hid, he was looking for me. Then I rushed up on him and gave him a big hug. :hug: "You look wonderfull Isail" Legolas said as I took his arm and turned red. :blush: :wub:

ElizabethSwan July 30th, 2006 09:49 PM

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Please tell me what you think of my story. I want to know so I can change things if I need to

ElizabethSwan July 30th, 2006 10:33 PM

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Chapter 5

We had sat down to dinner and ate a feast fit for kings. "Lets go dance I like the music and y..." Legolas said. "Go on, what were you going to say something about me I hope?" I said as I batted my eyelashes :wink: " Uhhhh no ummm just it's nothing realy. :blush: " Legolas said as if he stumbled on the words. We went to dance and kissed my hand. :wub: (Again!) I saw Aragorn dancing with Arwen and Aragorn winked at me. :wink: I had scowled :mad: at Aragorn for teasing me and shifted my gase back to Legolas. "Your an amazing dancer!" I had said to Legolas. "Thank you, it was known in the palace that I was a natural born dancer and was taught right away and taught well." Legolas said. "Wow, I wish I had your talent, I can't even dance half as good as you." I said. "You dance fine for a common person." Legolas said. We went on dancing and when it came too the slow sad songs we went to the garden and Legolas had started to sing that eerie song he had sung when I had first met him. "Isail, remember when I had first met you 20 years ago? You probably dont I meen it's just I've been thnking about you every day since you left mirkwood." Legolas confessed. :blush: "Me to Legolas, Im meleth le.(I love you)" I said "Same here Isail." Legolas said. We were close he held me tight as if he didnt want to let go. Then it happened he kissed me and I kissed him. :makeout: Then from somewhere I herd an "AWWWWWWWWWWW". :banghead: I knew right away that it was Aragorn. :devil: I had some IDEAS that woulnt be right. :punch: :swordfigh :stretcher:

snl91 July 31st, 2006 03:00 AM

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This is really good! Update soon!

Shay :biggrin:

ElizabethSwan July 31st, 2006 03:54 AM

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Chapter6

As soon as I herd the 'AWWWWWW' I sought out Aragorn right away and ranted him out. :rant: :mad: :rant: "YOU DID THAT ON PORPOUSE(sp) JUST SO YOU WOULD HAVE SOMETHING ELSE TO TEASE ME ON!":banghead: "NO I had just been walking and happen to see that you were kissing tis' all that I did." Aragorn had said trying to sound like me. "IF YOU TELL ANYONE MY SWORD AND YOUR LIFE COMPETE MY SWORD WINS."I angrily said.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A week later the council was meting and I was evesdropping to here what there talking about. "Yes Gimly war is appon us, it is enevidable." Elrond had said. "I'm not going to say I'm helping or not. From the last battle, it left Minas Terith(sp) unarmed and falling appart." Farimir had said. "Legolas, what about you, your the only one who hasn't made a decion yet." Elrond said. "I will fight, but what ever you do dont tell Isail, she'd be in tears." Legolas said. When the council was over I had sought Legolas out to talk to him. "You cant got to war now, you could die, and that would kill me." :cry: I cried. "Who told you, was it Aragorn or did you listen in?" Legolas said. "I listened in, you sounded worried when Elrond was talking to you earlier, so I needed to find out what was going on." I said in a rush. "We need to get you out of Rivendell and to Mirkwood(sp) so you will safe. My father will take care of you untill the fight is over." Legolas said. "NO I'M NOT LEAVING YOU TO BE SLAUGHTERED LIKE AN ANIMAL OR SOME OLD AND FOROTTEN ORC, YOUR SO OVER PRETECTIVE! I...." I had started but then slapped him across the face:punch: and ran away crying. :cry: "ISAIL COME BACK! ISAIL! :cry: " Legolas was stunned that I would do something like that but was sad I had left. "What the, ISAIL whats wrong?" Aragorn said as I ran past him tears streaming from my eyes. I went to my quiet spot and cried like I was crying the rain from the begining of time to the end. "ISAIL, whats wrong?" Aragorn said as he found me.

ElizabethSwan July 31st, 2006 02:25 PM

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Chapter7

I didn't look up and said, "I hit legollasfor sending me to mirkwood while you fight. :cry: :cry: :cry: I'm not going to leave him to be killed, he will need my comfort and help if he is wounded. Like the time when he was fighting that Urak-Hai and got a severe chest wound and was squirming like heck and wanting me so bad he would run all the way to rivendell just to see me." "You need to talk to him and not with yelling or fighting, I know you are concerned, Arwen feels the same way about me, look if you need me to do it then tell me, I will be here to talk anytime." Aragorn said in a friendly love. :hug: He gave me a hug then left. I cried :cry: some more and then went to my room and got changed into some casual clothes and then went to see Elrond. :legolas: "Legolas will be all right if you belive in him and ecept(sp) your departure. You must talk to him and straighten out the matter, then tell me how it went." Elrond said. "But if I go he'll, if he get wounded, will go after me and I know that would kill him from losing blood, then I would have to kill myself because I love him." I said in a rush. " :ohmy: Well go talk to him, he will understand. He wants you safe and out of harms way and you wnt the same for him." Elrond said. "I'll try my Lord, thank you for the advice." and with that said I went Aragorn and told him what he said and what I said, though a little embaressed. "Good, Legolas wants to talk to you in your room tonight." Aragorn said. "Ok, I'll do that, if he wants to." I said a little scared for what he will do.

ElizabethSwan July 31st, 2006 07:22 PM

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Chapter8

That night I was in my room awaiting Legolas. "Good luck Legolas." Aragorn said. I herd my door creek and hid behind the curtains not wanting to talk. "Isail?" Legolas said. I ran over to him and gave him a hug :hug: and cried :cry: :cry: on his shoulder. "I'm sorry, I was mad and I was not thinking and I'm so sorry." I said. He looked very loving and forgiving when I finaly looked in his eyes. "It is ok, I am here." Legolas said as he held me tight. I cried so much I had already gotten the sholder of his tunic soaked.Legolas was all ofa sudden worried but still held me close. :archery: I had looked up and saw him get peirced with a sword in the back. "LEGOLAS!!" I had screamed.A figure emerged and had ripped the sword through his fleash. I herd a scream of pain and I grabbed my sword and stuck it in the strangers throught(sp) and killed him. I ran to Legolas and put him on my bed and shouted, "DO FO LEGOLAS RISH IO SERG!!(OH NO LEGOLAS IS COVERED IN BLOOD)" To my suprise Aragorn had herd me and came in. He saw me holding Legolas, crying and tying to calm him down. "ISAIL, LEGOLAS are you alright? I herd you shouting and came..." He started as he saw me and Legolas.

snl91 July 31st, 2006 08:41 PM

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OH MY GOSH!!!! :unsure: Legolas is hurt! Please update soon!!!!

Shay :biggrin:

ElizabethSwan July 31st, 2006 10:40 PM

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Chapter9

Aragorn rushed over and I wouldn't let go of Legolas. "You need to let go so I can look at him!!! He could die!!!!" Aragorn said. "NO I WON'T LET GO EVER!!!!! YOU CAN'T MAKE ME EITHER!!!!!!" I shouted. I was in shock from legolas getting hurt. He was uncontios(sp) and barely breathing but I still held him as close as I could. "Whats going on? I herd you argueing(sp) from out in the hallway, very disturbing." Elrond said. He then saw me on my bed holding on to something and crying. "What's going on Aragorn?" Elrond said worried. Aragorn explained that Legolas got attacked by a stranger while holding on to Isai and talking to her and now she won't let go of him. "Isail, you need to let me see him or he could die, please Isail I know how much you love him but you need to let go." Erond said. He took me off of him and tld Aragorn to hold on to me. Elrond said something in elvish I can't understand and then took him to a room. "Let me be by his side at least my lord, please?" I said. "No Isail, this time you can't." Elrond said sternly. I went back to my room and started cry on my bloody bed.

snl91 August 1st, 2006 12:17 AM

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Thats ok! I'll be here when you get some more posted!!!

Shay :biggrin:

ElizabethSwan August 1st, 2006 09:28 PM

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I Need some help on some ideas for the next chapter. If you haveany tell me.I've edited my last chapter so please read and respond.

snl91 August 2nd, 2006 09:50 PM

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You could explain who it was that hurt Legolas, such as a friend who was jealous of him and Isail or an enemy! Also you could write about Legolas getting better or worse! Hope that helps! :)

Shay

ElizabethSwan August 2nd, 2006 11:09 PM

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Chapter10


When I was in my room I saw the body of the stranger I had killed. "OH MY GOD!!!!! SHARA!!!!!" I had said. *screams from terror and shock* (like, if you have seen Harry Potter 4, when Fleur see's cedric dead.) :ohmy: :ill: I felt sick. Just then Aragorn walked in and said, "What's wrong? I herd you screem and ran in." I pointed to the dead body, shaking and pale. "MY GOD!!! :ohmy: IS THAT THE STRANGER YOU KILLED?" Aragorn said. " Y-yes i-it i-is." I said stumbling on the words. "SHARA!!!! He was like a brother to me" Aragorn breathed. "I'm sorry Aragorn I did not know and my defencive part of me took over. when some one I love :heart: is attacked, I attack or in this case kill that person." I said without stumbling. "HA!!! So you do love Legolas!!":wub: :wub: Aragorn mocked. He nudged me and all I wanted to do right know was stick my daggers up his butt. :rant: :mad: I looked at him and scowled. * :dry: * was aragorns expression.

snl91 August 3rd, 2006 07:48 PM

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AHHHH!!! Cliff hanger! It's ok I'll wait! lol!

Shay :biggrin:

ElizabethSwan August 3rd, 2006 11:53 PM

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Chapter11


I ran to Legolas' room and he wasn't there, I continued to serch for him all over the place and didn't find him. When I got back to my room Aragorn was still there and pacing around Shara's dead body. "Why would Shara want Legolas dead. They were good friends...I'll go talk to Arwen about this she'll know." Aragorn said as I walked in. " :( He's not here!!!" I said. "Who? Tell me Isail, who is gone." Aragorn sternly said. "Legolas, he is missing, I went looking for him and he was gone." I said rummaging through the drawers of my desk. "There I found it!!!!" I said. "Found what? :huh: " Aragorn said confused. "My Elvish translation book. I need it to read the note I found." I said. "What note? I'm confused, you lost me when you told me someone was gone." Aragorn said. "I'll break it down for you. I needed comfort so I went to see Legolas and I found a note and found he was gone. I then came here to get my translation book so I can read the note. Now I am going to read the note. Did...you...understand...me?" I said slowly "Yes! :rant: :dry: :mad: I did, *sticks toung(sp) out at me like a little kid*" Aragorn said. Me * :biggrin: Laughs*

snl91 August 6th, 2006 06:09 AM

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Great update! Can't wait to see what the note says!

Shay :biggrin:

ElizabethSwan August 6th, 2006 06:18 PM

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Chapter12


"Aragorn I know what the note says!!" I said. "Ok, read it. I want to know if it was from Shara or not." Aragorn said. (both of us: ...) " 'If you are reading this note legolas is dead or very badly hurt then run off. I am either dead or very badly hurt. Isail, I love you, take my sword to Eyomer(sp), he'll know what to do with it. Shara.' WOW!!!" I said. *starts to cry* :cry: "Don't cry Isail, I am here." Aragorn said. *holds Isail*
FLASHBACK
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"You can't catch me know Isail! :laugh: You are way behind me!!" Shara said. "Not for long Shara, you forget that I am an elf! I'll be ahead soon!" I said. I had taken many trips to Edoras when I was younger. This one was no different exept I was saying goodbye to Shara. He is a rider of the ridemark and he was leaving. "I won! Shara, lets get lunch. Then we can go riding!" I said. We got lunch and I had gotten on my faveorite horse Isilwin. She was pure golden in color and had a pure white mane. Shara had put a saddle on her and I said, "What are you doing, you know I don't ride with a saddle Shara!" "Whoops!! I'll take it off, then we can go riding." Shara said. And with that we took off. I had been talking with Shara when Olett (Shara's horse) went all crazy and spooked. "Shara!! We are ready to ride!!" Eyomer said. It was Eyomer. "Ok. Eyomer, this is Isail, a good friend of mine." Shara said. "Nice to meet you Isail, I take it that you are having a nice stay here in Edoras?" Eyomer said. "Yes, I am. You have a beautiful horse!!"I said. "Thank you!" Eyomer said. "I am ready to go!" Shara said. "Goodbye Isail, I will miss you!" Shara said. "Same here Shara!" I said. *shara hugs me goodbye, i hug shara goodbye* END OF FLASH BACK.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Isail, are you ok? You haven't said anything for 10 minutes!" Aragorn said. "I'm alright. I just was thinking about something. Thats all." I said. "Ok, I have to go talk to Arwen now. If you need me I'll be in the gardens." Aragorn said.*kisses my forhead in friendly love* I then walked to my quiet spot and drifted off to sleep. :sleep:


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